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Today we were working on, how to make an Advertisement! So today I choose A Wheelbarrow and made it like it was a new item that just came out!
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Wednesday, March 13, 2019
Monday, December 10, 2018
My Persuasive Writing Letter To The Principal!
W.A.L.T: My w.a.l.t for today is to write a lesson to our Principal at Parkview Primary School.
Here Is My Writing:
Ella H. 123A Horsey Street, Parklands, Christchurch.
30/11/2018.
10 Chadbury Street Parklands, Christchurch.
Dear Mr Thomas,
I am writing to you cause I think we should keep the red and black colors on our uniform. The reason that I'm saying this is because, they are our traditional colors and they are the Canterbury colors, and the Canterbury colors make us look kinda smartish.
Why I am choosing to keep the red and black colors? I'm choosing to keep the red and black colors because, they are our school colors and people will know us as Parkview School if we keep the colors the same. I think if we change the colors we will not be Parkview School anymore because, we will not look the same and we won't keep our tradition which is the most important part about a great, fantastic, kind and loving school. If we keep the colors the same way we will have memory from them and also we will still be supporting the Canterbury Rugby team. :)
Comment what should I do to make this writing better?
Comment below if you like my writing? (Or if you hated it?) :(
But of course you don´t have to comment! :)
BYE BYE!!! :)
Comment below if I should actually send this to the Principal?
Wednesday, December 5, 2018
Cats Are Better Than Doggies - Persuasive Writing!
W.A.L.T: Today we are learning to make an argument/Persuasive text. (Own Choice.)
Today I choose Cats are better than Dogs, but of course I love those doggies, I love every animal, its just that I had to chose sometime and some people were doing it so I thought I would do it. :)
I hope you enjoy my writing! :)
I strongly believe that cats are better than dogs because, cats are very small and you can cuddle them, and with dogs they are large and you sometimes can’t cuddle them like you can do with cats.
Firstly: cats are better than dogs because cats are a lot smaller than some dogs and cats can have amazing cute small little kittens, but dogs can’t. Cats are SSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOO much FLUFFIER than dogs can be! Not much dogs are as fluffy as cats can be, where cats have lots of fur because they are made with it, but their fur makes them look AMAZINGLY cute and soft and SSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOO warm when you cuddle them. It just makes me want to SQUEEZE them to DEATH!!! (But please don't kill them!)
Secondly: With cats you can keep them home for a long amount of time if they have a little tray and they are toilet trained. With dogs if you have them home for a long amount of time they might wee or poo inside and rip up the furniture and maybe even destroy the house and your belongings, they could also get into the food, basically what I’m trying to say, they will destroy the house if they are left home alone! With a cat they won’t do anything like that and your house will be perfect just the way you left it when you get home. So basically with a cat you can trust them leaving them alone for a while, but not with dogs!
Thirdly: Dogs don’t really sleep for that long because they are always full of energy, aren’t they? Well I think they are always full of energy. With cats, cats are quite and sleep with you and don't lick you while your trying to sleep. Also dogs bark really loudly, cats meow not so loud and if they meow loud they only do it at another cat in their territory, which is usually outside so you don't hear it as much.
Finally: Dogs need to be walk all the time and sometimes you don't have the time to walk them. Cats don't really need to be walk, all you have to do with cats to stretch their legs is to let them outside, then get back to your work or whatever you were doing.
Conclusion: Those are the reasons that I think cats are WWWWWWAAAAAAYYYYYY better than dogs!!!!!! So get a cat now and you´ll see why cats are so amazing compared to dogs. If you are allergic to cats still get one they will help you SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOO much and fill up your empty heart, (that they melted in the first place because they were so pretty and kind.) (Also cats are filling your heart up with goodness not badness!) You need to get a cat even if your a DOG PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Ella.
Feel free to comment below on what you liked and what I need to improve.
I hope you enjoyed my writing.
Have a great day! :)
Thursday, November 29, 2018
My Mysterious 100 Word Challenge!!!
100 Word Challenge!
Frozen on the spot mixed state of fear and wonder. Alice and Bob gazed at the strange happenings around them. They felt gazed as stuck in some horrible dream! Cards, some small and some large, darted to and fro in front of their eyes, dancing menacingly as controlled by an invisible threat, as if they had a mind of their own. Confused yet mesmerized, thinking of why they're here. Alice and Bob began to make their way into the dark, ice cold, creepy forest!“Wait a minute!” Bob said confused with himself!“What?” Alice asked. “We seem to be on the television!” Bob Explained. “WOW! So we aren’t endanger?” Asked Alice. “I guess not.” Bob said. “YAY!!!!!!!!” Yelled Alice. But that's only what they thought… Are they endanger? Are they not?
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Thursday, November 8, 2018
100 Word Challenge!!!
‘I wondered what was behind that door?’
Hello Everybody,
If you're reading this, you will be horrified!!!
One night I went with my friends to go skating at this abandoned place, but don’t worry my friends had been there the night before so we were safe. So basically we went in and were heading up to the top floor where the skate park is, and we saw blood on the floor and walls EVERYWHERE… but it was dry blood!!! So we kept on going!When we got higher we saw lots of wet blood and we heard a piercing scream… after that we saw a light behind a bloody door!!!
WE WENT IN!!!
AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
‘It was the SCARIEST night of my life!’
Thursday, November 1, 2018
My Amazing 5 Sentence Challenge With A Twist!!!!
5 Sentence Challenge:
“Hello everybody, my name is Ella!” “Today me and my family is going to the Cheese Chutney, which is like this fair, so let's go!” “We are here at the Cheese Chutney fair, and i’m so excited! Are you excited?” “The first thing we are going to do is go Horse Riding, YAY!!!!!!!!!” “Wow, that was so fun I loved it. Now we are going to have a look around, and then we sadly have to go home, but I guess everybody has to go home sometime.”
Hey Bloggers,
My name is Ella and today I've done a 5 Sentence Challenge. A 5 Sentence Challenge is where you do a Short Story but it has a picture that you have to make the 5 Sentences off and of course it can only be 5 Sentences!
I've got a challenge for you guys today!
The challenge that I'm going to give you today is...
What can you spot!
So What can you spot game is where you spot as many of the things that I'll put down below, then you comment if you like the game and if you got them all or not!
So I hope you enjoy!!!
Here is the picture:
1. How many horses are there?
2. Is there one boy on one of the horses and is there one girl on the other horse? True or False?
3. What is the ride called?
4. What does the sign say behind the girl with the blue shirt and the white apron?
5. What is the girl with the white apron and the blue shirt selling to the other lady?
6. How many tents are there?
Comment below if you got them all right or not?
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