Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, November 29, 2018
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
ReplyDeleteHi Ella, I’m Grace and from Marshland school. I really enjoyed your 100 word story. My favourite part of your story was when Bob and Alice made their way into the forest, the words you used in this sentence were very descriptive and well-written. Maybe next time you could use a different font, because it might be easier to read. But in conclusion your blog post was very well done.