My Persuasive Writing Letter To The Principal!

W.A.L.T: My w.a.l.t for today is to write a lesson to our Principal at Parkview Primary School.

Here Is My Writing:

Ella H.      123A Horsey Street, Parklands, Christchurch. 

30/11/2018. 

10 Chadbury Street Parklands, Christchurch. 

 

Dear Mr Thomas, 

 I am writing to you cause I think we should keep the red and black colors on our uniform. The reason that I'm saying this is because, they are our traditional colors and they are the Canterbury colors, and the Canterbury colors make us look kinda smartish. Why I am choosing to keep the red and black colors? I'm choosing to keep the red and black colors because, they are our school colors and people will know us as Parkview School if we keep the colors the same. I think if we change the colors we will not be Parkview School anymore because, we will not look the same and we won't keep our tradition which is the most important part about a great, fantastic, kind and loving school. If we keep the colors the same way we will have memory from them and also we will still be supporting the Canterbury Rugby team. :)

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