Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, July 29, 2019
My Amazing Logo!
3 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Kia ora Ella,
ReplyDeleteYou are a very talented artist and I really enjoyed how you have used the different shades of blue. My favourite colour is blue and has been that way for most of my life, funny how lots of things have changed in my life but not my favourite colour. My only feedback about your logo is to think about not having to many fine details as these are hard to see when the logo is very small. Think about McDonalds which has a really simple logo that can be made very small or really big and is always easy to see. Your branches may be too fine to see when the logo is small.
Do you swim competitively? I love to swim in ocean swimming races, my furthest race was 2km.
Nga mihi,
Mark- Manaiakalani Outreach Facilitator
Ki ora my name is Tamara
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because your logo is very detailed and blue.
Did you know I like creating logos too.
Next time, you could color the background blue or black like the night sky.
Why did you choose to do a logo and publish it to your blog?
Kia ora Tamara,
DeleteThank you very much for the very great and positive comment! :)
Yeah I love creating logos and I bet you are an amazing artist! Thank you very much for giving me feedback on what I can do! I will definitely use your feedback next time I make a logo! :) I chose to do a logo because we were making a logo for our team of school and this was just a practice. I chose to put my logo on the blog for people to see and hopefully give me feedback so I can improve next time I make a logo :)
Thank you very much again for your helpful and positive comment! Also thank you for taking the time out of your day to come and check out my blog and also comment! :)
Sincerely.
Ella.