Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, September 6, 2018
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

Bello Ella!
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem! The spider eyes and rats are gross! It made me think of my poem I did. Maybe next time for your post you could put if it was challenging to make stuff rhyme. Anyway I love your post, keep up the great work!
Cybella
Feel free to comment on my blog!
Bello Cybella,
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog and yes I will go and comment on your blog now, thanks for the feedback and help and next time i'll say if it was challenging.
Thank again for coming to check out my blog, and also for the great feedback.
Kind Regards,
Ella. :)
Nayyyyy Cybella,
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog, and thanks for taking the time out of your day to come and check out my blog. :)
Thanks you so much for the feedback and I will next time say if it was challenging or not.
Thanks again for commenting and giving me feedback, and also making me laugh by saying Bello instead of Hello. :)
I will come on to your blog when I get the chance. Thanks.
Kind Regards,
Ella.