Here is my writing:
As I read the content of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face. Everyday I would send a letter to my mum. I would says that I got up and made my bed, opening my windows and my curtains, and picking out my clothes and going to have a shower. Then I went to brush my pearly whites, and brushed my hair and do all my bathroom things and I also went to the toilet like most people do in the morning. After the day was done I went to bed again. How was your day?
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