The Day I Made A Scary Friend!

      W.A.L.T: Today we are learning to write narratives.  

I really enjoyed using my imagination for this story. I also really like the story starter as well. But I found it hard to figure out how to edit the rest of the story. I hope you enjoy! Feel free to give me some feedback! And check out the rest of my blog!                   

                   

                   Here is a picture of what my story is about: 

                              The Day I Made A Scary Friend! 

 Today's the day! I thought to myself… the day I go to my first rodeo! I went to the rodeo, and went to sign in like normal. But then this happened…. I WAS MISTAKEN FOR A BULL RIDER!!!!!!! I was so scared! I even thought to myself that I’m gonna die today! The people that were working there told me that I was going to ride the most out of control one! That made me nearly faint! I was definitely going to die today… I took some deep breaths. Then they put me on to the bull, and gave me a piece of short rope that is connected to his collar. I just thought about being calm and not what happens to other people that ride the bulls on T.V. I heard the crowd cheering so loud. I saw the dusty, sandy arena that went up in flames by the last rider! But all I did was try to stay on this bucking bronco, and stare and the nice blue walls around me. I blocked out all the noise, I blocked out the bucking and I just took some nice deep breaths. In the middle of doing that, I heard the extremely loud bell that opens up the bright blue gate. So that was it! I thought to myself, while the Bull was charging out the gate. I’m gonna die! The Bull started bucking and rearing and going so crazy, until… I fell off!!! I started running my heart out while the bull was chasing me to the gate! I screamed to the people working the gate, ‘OPEN THE GATE!!!!!! OPEN THE GATE!!!!!’ And just at the last minute, they opened the gate. But… they didn’t shut the gate in time… the Bull got out, and was still chasing me nearly to my death!!! The Bull got faster and faster and ate off all my clothes! Lucky, the Bull didn’t eat off my underwear or else I’ll be naked. And that wouldn’t be good! The Bull still chasing me, (while I was still scared out of my mind!) I came across a lake with boats and so many other people, and I had no choice but to jump in it. I leaped off the side of the land, and heard a tiny wee splash, then of course swam away as fast as I could! After I got a wee bit away, I heard a massive splash, and I thought that was the Bull, so I swam even faster! After awhile of me swimming, I turned around with the water swishing with my body. Then I saw the Bull struggling to swim, and I knew straight away he was going to drown! So I quickly swam as fast as I could all the way over to the bull, and grabbed the rope attached his collar, and helped him out of the water. Once we got out of the water, I dried the Bull off with a towel (still scared of him,) then walked him back to the rodeo. I could tell he didn’t want to go back (by him refusing to go in the gate.) So I just decided to keep him, and we made such a great bond together. Then we lived even more happier then we were before! We didn’t even care about the other people judging us, and if they did offend us, we would kick them together as a happy family! Also I named the Bull Calfter!